Good morning chaps,
Andante, sadly my teacher died about 30 years ago so unless I get on the ouija board, that's a no go
Cato, joining this forum and submitting some of my work for inspection was one of the methods I wanted to employ in my learning, and people have been kind enough to give me pointers, for which I am very grateful. I will ask questions in the future I'm sure, so be prepared
Mahlerian, Thanks for your suggestions, I do appreciate your insights and will try to use them in further revisions and future work. I know I am a novice at this, and that is why I really do appreciate the critique as much as the folks telling me they enjoyed the piece. P.s. I don't mind the hijacking, its entertaining at least, probably not for you, but perhaps this could be a topic for a new thread, it seems to be a bone of contention that might produce some interesting points of view.