Barber Agnus Dei

Started by bloeff, July 27, 2013, 08:50:11 PM

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bloeff

Hi all,

Sorry I haven't posted in a while. It's been a rough year. I lost my mother and my daughter. This seemed like an appropriate song to record:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O4iyH-oBNPk

I believe that my phrasing and overall dynamics are improving. Let me know what you think.

Thanks,
Bruce

jochanaan

You sang all the parts?  Impressive! :o ;D

That said, I would like to hear more overall dynamic if possible.  The climax should be almost overwhelming yet controlled; the ending should fade completely into silence--no one should be able to tell exactly when the sound stops! ??? Use some vibrato in the loud passages; that will give them more impact.

Also, your middle and lower tones have a little more "head voice" than I like.  Open, relaxed chest tones are more effective for the men's parts, especially the lowest bass tones.
Imagination + discipline = creativity

bloeff

Thank you so much for your feedback. Being 61 years old and never having had a single voice lesson, this kind of input is invaluable to me. A leading classical record company actually wants me on their label! I'd much rather hear constructive criticism now than after releasing a crappy CD.

Thanks again,
Bruce

jochanaan

No voice lessons, huh?  Well, here's the first, and the last: Breathe.  Deep into and from your belly, like a yoga master.  Learn that, and the rest will fall into place.  Breathe, breathe, breathe...
Imagination + discipline = creativity

Karl Henning

Diaphragmatic breath . . . .
Karl Henning, Ph.D.
Composer & Clarinetist
Boston MA
http://www.karlhenning.com/
[Matisse] was interested neither in fending off opposition,
nor in competing for the favor of wayward friends.
His only competition was with himself. — Françoise Gilot

cjvinthechair

Gee, how do you begin with something like that ? So fine - and fitting.
Clive.

jochanaan

Quote from: harikemning on August 15, 2013, 07:42:25 AM
Diaphragmatic breath . . . .
Yes, but the diaphragm isn't really under conscious control.  The supporting abdominal muscles are easier for the brain to control...
Imagination + discipline = creativity

Karl Henning

Quote from: jochanaan on August 20, 2013, 01:33:18 PM
Yes, but the diaphragm isn't really under conscious control.  The supporting abdominal muscles are easier for the brain to control...

Aye.
Karl Henning, Ph.D.
Composer & Clarinetist
Boston MA
http://www.karlhenning.com/
[Matisse] was interested neither in fending off opposition,
nor in competing for the favor of wayward friends.
His only competition was with himself. — Françoise Gilot