My First Music Forum And Song And Clip :)

[AmirMaor]

Hi,

My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!

I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.

Here is my new song (and clip)

hope you like it 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI
Tnx

[Szykneij]

Hi Amir --  The reason you haven't received any replies is probably because this is a classical forum message board and most people here aren't into your type of music. Having listened to your song, though, I have to say it's a very good pop tune -- catchy chorus, contrasting middle eight that kicks things up a notch, nicely recorded with some interesting combinations of instruments. To offer some constructive criticism, maybe the lyrics could be a bit more polished to match the quality of the music -- some of the rhymes are a little too prosaic for my taste. Nice work, though. I enjoyed hearing it. 

[AmirMaor]

Thanks for the honest comment

Usually I prefer this kind of music, the reason I choice this forum is because I think people here have better understanding about music (from any kind) and i would like to here there opinion.

I happy you enjoy it, and you're right that it could be better, I wonder if you notice my accent?

tnx again

[Szykneij]

Thanks for the honest comment

Usually I prefer this kind of music, the reason I choice this forum is because I think people here have better understanding about music (from any kind) and i would like to here there opinion.

I happy you enjoy it, and you're right that it could be better, I wonder if you notice my accent?

tnx again

Yes, I believe your accent is what makes the song work as well as it does. The lack of sustain on many of the notes you sing (in particular "what are you doing to me" in the chorus) sounds appealing with your particular articulation. I don't think it would sound as natural with my Boston accent or a southern twang.

[AmirMaor]

You don't know how much I'm happy to here that, that is way i'm in english forum so i'll know how people that speak natural english here my accent(for me off course it's hard to notice).

And I hoped it will do the magic for the good way (that way I add also middle eastern sound so the accent will "flow" nicely.

Tnx again for the comment

[bhodges]

Hi Amir, and welcome! Hope you enjoy yourself here.

--Bruce