Song without Words In E minor No.3

[Saul]

Performing my composition on the piano - Allegro Vivace.

Best Wishes,

Saul

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOy0QRWhrDc

[greg]

I like some of your chord progressions, but what would help out would be a few rolled chords, and less of that 4-note 16th note theme, which ends up becoming a bit monotonous.
specifically, the chord at :20 would sound good with a nice, broad roll to it.

[Saul]

Well thanks for the suggestion and for listening !