Author Topic: The Emperor's Realm  (Read 11819 times)

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The Emperor

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Re: The Emperor's Realm
« Reply #40 on: April 05, 2008, 01:56:16 AM »
I can feel the pressure!!!  ;D
Tkx Sir George for the kind words ;)

The Emperor

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Re: The Emperor's Realm
« Reply #41 on: May 10, 2008, 11:23:44 AM »
« Last Edit: May 11, 2008, 06:23:21 AM by The Emperor »

George

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« Reply #42 on: May 11, 2008, 04:59:42 AM »
Another one for piano  8)
http://www.mediafire.com/?cxby1lz2yxn

Wow, this one may the best yet. I love the mood in this one. My only suggestion is to edit out some of the notes in the melody in the first/final section as things get a bit crowded. Well done!

The Emperor

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Re: The Emperor's Realm
« Reply #43 on: May 11, 2008, 05:12:02 AM »
Wow, this one may the best yet. I love the mood in this one. My only suggestion is to edit out some of the notes in the melody in the first/final section as things get a bit crowded. Well done!
Tkx George!
Yeh, the volume on the accompaniment could be lowered so the melody pops out more clearly. don't know if thats what you mean, i hear it fine in my head but yeh. Tkx again \o

George

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Re: The Emperor's Realm
« Reply #44 on: May 11, 2008, 05:16:39 AM »
Tkx George!
Yeh, the volume on the accompaniment could be lowered so the melody pops out more clearly. don't know if thats what you mean, i hear it fine in my head but yeh. Tkx again \o


I actually meant that the melody literally has more notes at a few points in the A section and then in the closing section. When this happens, it sounds crowded, like there's too many notes in the melody (Right Hand.) I actually like that the accompaniment has a strong role, it helps to create the mood.

The best way to explain my point is to consider the opening melody the piano plays in the Rach 3 PC. One of the things that makes it so effective and mysterious is the fact that it doesn't have a lot of notes, it has just enough to make its point, leaving some air to breathe.   

The Emperor

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« Reply #45 on: May 11, 2008, 05:36:25 AM »
Oh i see what you mean, i actually did that on purpose, in the last section i put the focus on the left hand playing a simple ostinato pattern and open that room in the right hand.

The goal was to be familiar but different at the same time, cuz i've repeat it with more notes  and the breaks in the left hand two times already( i like the rhythm of the melody, is unusual of me, maybe because of the time signature).

I wanted a more flowing melodic ending so i did that.

Anyway, tkx for listening and the coments, i might review it later,  as i always do after a while with a clean mind and fresh prespective, cuz after so many hours writing and listening to it, i don't know what the hell to think eheh.




The Emperor

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Re: The Emperor's Realm
« Reply #46 on: August 03, 2008, 09:05:47 AM »
It's been a while!
New piano piece http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?vxxzcskfmgi
Enjoy!
« Last Edit: August 07, 2008, 10:38:05 AM by The Emperor »