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Title: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on July 21, 2007, 10:38:48 AM
Hey, i decided to come back to composition, it has been a long time, i was kinda turned off from the all thing.
Anyway some feedback is needed here!

http://www.mediafire.com/?1mepbtentce
Piano piece i'm doing right now, just 0.55 seconds so far, need to find the right second motif ;D

http://www.mediafire.com/?b1dyfdnkxje
An elegy i posted here some time ago, i decided to rework on it and took some of the advices i've read here.

Tkx in advance.



Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 04:42:51 AM
Finished the piano piece , it's 2.30 and i think it's fairly enjoyable. Don't know if i would call it classical but i think it's fairly enjoyable.

J.Guerreiro - Memórias.mp3
you can download it here

you can download the score here
http://www.mediafire.com/?3bgmafnuy9j

Btw it was my first score (with sibelius), my notation skills are far from good, so any comments on the score itself are welcome and of course the music.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on August 11, 2007, 06:00:24 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 04:42:51 AM
Finished the piano piece , it's 2.30 and i think it's fairly enjoyable. Don't know if i would call it classical but i think it's fairly enjoyable.

J.Guerreiro - Memórias.mp3
you can download it here

I think you are missing a link here.  :-\
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:03:56 AM
oops i didn't work   ;D
http://www.mediafire.com/?anunw9ztmn5
Here is the music eheh
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on August 11, 2007, 06:09:30 AM
I am really getting into Memorias. I mean this as a compliment: it sounds a bit Chopin-esque.

I haven't had a chance to check out the other stuff, but congratulations on Memorias!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:11:56 AM
Yes Haffner, it does have a bit of Chopin influence in there amongst others.
And that is a compliment indeed ;D
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on August 11, 2007, 06:16:25 AM
Quote from: George on August 11, 2007, 06:00:24 AM
I think you are missing a link here.  :-\

Thanks!

Sounds lovely!

I hear Satie and Chopin in there.  :)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:19:35 AM
Tkx George.
Now that is something to think about "Modern Chopin", that's a nice concept eheh
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on August 11, 2007, 06:20:59 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:19:35 AM
Tkx George.
Now that is something to think about "Modern Chopin", that's a nice concept eheh


Actually I changed my comment to Satie/Chopin. I think that better explains what I am trying to say. 
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:28:39 AM
Never heard Satie, must now!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on August 11, 2007, 06:45:52 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:28:39 AM
Never heard Satie...!

:o
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Que on August 11, 2007, 07:48:42 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on August 11, 2007, 06:28:39 AM
Never heard Satie, must now!

Not that you have missed something... 8)

Q
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on August 11, 2007, 05:22:42 PM
Quote from: Que on August 11, 2007, 07:48:42 AM
Not that you have missed something... 8)

Q

Ooooooo.....you will pay for that one, sir!  :P  $:)  ;D
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Que on August 11, 2007, 09:31:22 PM
Quote from: George on August 11, 2007, 05:22:42 PM
Ooooooo.....you will pay for that one, sir!  :P  $:)  ;D

For Satie - anything! ;D

Q
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on October 19, 2007, 04:45:43 PM
http://www.mediafire.com/?box4t73uyju
A piece for piano and vocals (in portuguese) recorded "over the internet" eheh, The quality isn't the best, but it's listenable.

http://www.mediafire.com/?e3tldvtlm71
A piano piece.

Enjoy.

Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on November 30, 2007, 05:59:13 PM
http://www.mediafire.com/?ewcbyiogzzn

Another one i just did, for piano and cello.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on November 30, 2007, 09:03:42 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on October 19, 2007, 04:45:43 PM

http://www.mediafire.com/?e3tldvtlm71
A piano piece.


This one is great! I love the broken-hearted mood it has.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on November 30, 2007, 10:43:13 PM
Tkx George 8)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on December 01, 2007, 02:30:54 PM
Eccelente!


This is meant as a compliment:
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on December 01, 2007, 05:08:46 PM
Tkx Haffner, nothing better than beavis and butthead to get the point  ;D
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on December 26, 2007, 01:25:34 PM
So, i started something today, it just came out, i thinking of doing a full strings work, kinda like a Chamber Symphony a la Shostakovich.

This what i did today, just 1.30m

http://www.mediafire.com/?f4yd9indjyg

Any comments, encouragemnt, criticism,observations, etc are welcome, this is kinda of new territory for me, so anything will help :)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on December 26, 2007, 07:57:50 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on December 26, 2007, 01:25:34 PM
So, i started something today, it just came out, i thinking of doing a full strings work, kinda like a Chamber Symphony a la Shostakovich.

This what i did today, just 1.30m

http://www.mediafire.com/?f4yd9indjyg

Any comments, encouragemnt, criticism,observations, etc are welcome, this is kinda of new territory for me, so anything will help :)

I love the mood, the drama and the idea of a work for strings alone. However, I am hearing quite a bit more repetition that I would prefer. Were you going for a minimalist approach?
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on December 27, 2007, 01:08:15 AM
Quote from: George on December 26, 2007, 07:57:50 PM
I love the mood, the drama and the idea of a work for strings alone. However, I am hearing quite a bit more repetition that I would prefer. Were you going for a minimalist approach?

I was not really thinking of anything, it just came out eheh
I see want you mean, i will work on that for sure, tkx for listening 8)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on December 27, 2007, 07:48:36 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on December 27, 2007, 01:08:15 AM
I was not really thinking of anything, it just came out eheh
I see want you mean, i will work on that for sure, tkx for listening 8)

No problem. The result sounds to me more like Tchaikovsky than DSCH.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on December 27, 2007, 10:46:34 AM
Yeh i definetely can see that, it doesn't remind me much of Shosty as well, which is a good thing, means i am not ripping him off eheh
One part actually reminds me of Dvorak's 7th symphony, i had no intention whatsoever, but it kinda reminds me of it.
Good thing i really like that Dvorak symphony  ;D
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on January 03, 2008, 01:46:22 PM
Really liked the Symphony demo. Interestingly, I thought Mahler more than once.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on January 03, 2008, 01:57:55 PM
Cool, Mahler is cool ;D

I'm taking a time off from the piece right now, i'll finish sometime in the future.

Just started reading a book about jazz theory, so i'm spending my time on the piano messing around and learning a bit more, very interesting.
I want to improve my piano skills!, it feels just great improvising over some basic jazz progressions, i imagine the pleasure it must be to play the more advanced stuff.
Damn time, so restrictive!!!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on January 03, 2008, 02:11:25 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on January 03, 2008, 01:57:55 PM

Damn time, so restrictive!!!




Especially when you're inspired. Best wishes to you and yours, Emperor.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on January 03, 2008, 02:13:02 PM
Quote from: Haffner on January 03, 2008, 02:11:25 PM



Especially when you're inspired. Best wishes to you and yours, Emperor.
Cheers Haffner, may the Metal Gods be always with you and yours! ;)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on January 18, 2008, 04:38:56 PM
Something i just did,

http://www.mediafire.com/?a5bm2zpd4zw

Piano piece, it has a middle eastern feel in some parts, i tried to put some jazz in there too, and this is what came out.

It was molded after a series of improvisations.

Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on January 23, 2008, 02:55:11 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on January 18, 2008, 04:38:56 PM
Something i just did,

http://www.mediafire.com/?a5bm2zpd4zw

Piano piece, it has a middle eastern feel in some parts, i tried to put some jazz in there too, and this is what came out.

It was molded after a series of improvisations.






I hear the jazz early. This piece at times makes me think of a Manhattan night: uncertain sometimes, deftly resolving others; the whole of this piece is the piece. The end is perfect.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on January 23, 2008, 03:04:22 PM
Yeh i call it desert night, kinda of pun cuz jazz normally reminds me of the night.
Tkx for listening  8)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on March 19, 2008, 04:38:32 PM
Another piano piece i just did, it's been a while :) Enjoy.
http://www.mediafire.com/?bgjjcn9xomn
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Ephemerid on March 19, 2008, 08:34:29 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on March 19, 2008, 04:38:32 PM
Another piano piece i just did, it's been a while :) Enjoy.
http://www.mediafire.com/?bgjjcn9xomn

I enjoyed it, Emperor, thanks for sharing.   :)

It unfolds nicely.  The first four or five chords first brought to mind Arvo Part's Fratres (it being in the phrygian mode)-- I wonder if you've heard Chick Corea's Children's Songs for piano? (no, they are certainly not songs for children to perform on the piano!) 

Good job!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on March 20, 2008, 11:44:24 AM
Tkx just josh, no i haven't heard those Chick Corea's pieces, i will give them a listen.
Yeh i see what you mean about the first 4 chords, maybe it was my subconscious working eheh

Anyway, tkx for listening and the comments :)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on March 20, 2008, 01:28:54 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on March 19, 2008, 04:38:32 PM
Another piano piece i just did, it's been a while :) Enjoy.
http://www.mediafire.com/?bgjjcn9xomn




I really hope this doesn't rub you the wrong way, but I can hear a massively distorted guitat accompanying alot of this. But then I'm a Metalhead from wayyyy back. Very cool!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on March 20, 2008, 02:46:06 PM
Actually i think i know what you mean.
One thing that really inspired me in this piece was flamenco guitar playing, so i went into the phrygian mode and at some times i kinda tried to emulate a guitar eheh
And of course, i'm a metalhead from way back too, so i guess sometimes that pops in the music 8)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: Haffner on March 20, 2008, 02:54:55 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on March 20, 2008, 02:46:06 PM
Actually i think i know what you mean.
One thing that really inspired me in this piece was flamenco guitar playing, so i went into the phrygian mode and at some times i kinda tried to emulate a guitar eheh
And of course, i'm a metalhead from way back too, so i guess sometimes that pops in the music 8)




This is a really good piece.
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on March 22, 2008, 06:40:07 AM
As always, tkx for listening and the comments Haffner, appreciated! 8)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on April 04, 2008, 06:54:41 PM
Quote from: The Emperor on March 19, 2008, 04:38:32 PM
Another piano piece i just did, it's been a while :) Enjoy.
http://www.mediafire.com/?bgjjcn9xomn


Very beautiful, mysterious, cool - as usual!

I expect no less from you.  :)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on April 05, 2008, 01:56:16 AM
I can feel the pressure!!!  ;D
Tkx Sir George for the kind words ;)
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on May 10, 2008, 12:23:44 PM
Another one for piano  8)
http://www.mediafire.com/?mqco21lf9vs
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on May 11, 2008, 05:59:42 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on May 10, 2008, 12:23:44 PM
Another one for piano  8)
http://www.mediafire.com/?cxby1lz2yxn

Wow, this one may the best yet. I love the mood in this one. My only suggestion is to edit out some of the notes in the melody in the first/final section as things get a bit crowded. Well done!
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on May 11, 2008, 06:12:02 AM
Quote from: George on May 11, 2008, 05:59:42 AM
Wow, this one may the best yet. I love the mood in this one. My only suggestion is to edit out some of the notes in the melody in the first/final section as things get a bit crowded. Well done!
Tkx George!
Yeh, the volume on the accompaniment could be lowered so the melody pops out more clearly. don't know if thats what you mean, i hear it fine in my head but yeh. Tkx again \o
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: George on May 11, 2008, 06:16:39 AM
Quote from: The Emperor on May 11, 2008, 06:12:02 AM
Tkx George!
Yeh, the volume on the accompaniment could be lowered so the melody pops out more clearly. don't know if thats what you mean, i hear it fine in my head but yeh. Tkx again \o


I actually meant that the melody literally has more notes at a few points in the A section and then in the closing section. When this happens, it sounds crowded, like there's too many notes in the melody (Right Hand.) I actually like that the accompaniment has a strong role, it helps to create the mood.

The best way to explain my point is to consider the opening melody the piano plays in the Rach 3 PC. One of the things that makes it so effective and mysterious is the fact that it doesn't have a lot of notes, it has just enough to make its point, leaving some air to breathe.   
Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on May 11, 2008, 06:36:25 AM
Oh i see what you mean, i actually did that on purpose, in the last section i put the focus on the left hand playing a simple ostinato pattern and open that room in the right hand.

The goal was to be familiar but different at the same time, cuz i've repeat it with more notes  and the breaks in the left hand two times already( i like the rhythm of the melody, is unusual of me, maybe because of the time signature).

I wanted a more flowing melodic ending so i did that.

Anyway, tkx for listening and the coments, i might review it later,  as i always do after a while with a clean mind and fresh prespective, cuz after so many hours writing and listening to it, i don't know what the hell to think eheh.



Title: Re: The Emperor's Realm
Post by: The Emperor on August 03, 2008, 10:05:47 AM
It's been a while!
New piano piece http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?vxxzcskfmgi
Enjoy!